Moonlitcry

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• Character's Name: Moonlitcry
  
  
• Gender: Tom
  
  
• Species: Cat
  
  
• Age: 11
  
  
• What breed do they most closely resemble?: Abyssinian
  
  
• Picture URL:
  
  This one has more of the right color pelt - i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb62/Rivereyes/262756974_7d9168e81d.jpg?t=1248032768
  
  This one's more the right setting and you can see more of the body - i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb62/Rivereyes/abybeech.jpg?t=1248034785
  
  
• What your character looks like: Golden-tan pelt. Sleek and lithe, but with strong features. Light amber eyes, often wide with feigned innocence. Ruffles around his face, in the manner of toms. Slightly rounded ears. Stomach, chest, and paw-tips slightly whiter than the rest of him. Tail a little long, helps him balance more easily. (It’s choppy, but because of the pictures, I figured it was okay)
  
  
• Clan: MountainClan
  
  
• What rank do they have? : Warrior
  
  
• What's their personality?: Moonlitcry acts tough, though he can be sensitive on the inside. He's often a bit mischievous. He tries his hardest on everything, but sometimes this isn’t quite enough. He respects those more senior to him. On the other hand, he can be obnoxious or annoying to those his age or younger. He likes to show off, and it usually either gets him in trouble, or he makes a fool of himself, or both. He tries to do well, but it’s hard for him. When he was apprenticed, he wasn't given the best mentor. Feathertouch did not scold him enough whenever he acted poorly because she was too sympathetic of his past. Since she was too gentle, he retains his kit-like behavior and gets into trouble all too often.
  
  
• Your character's history: Born in the forests of SunsetClan, Moonlitcry was a controversial kit. His mother was Lightningflash, a SunsetClan she-cat. His father was Tearflow, the MountainClan deputy. MountainClan claimed him as one of their own when Lightningflash died of old age soon after giving birth. Moonlitcry was her last kit. SunsetClan was too weak then to fight for him, so he is a member of MountainClan. Tearflow was mocked and disrespected, and soon lost his deputyship. Later, he died in a greencough epidemic. Few blame and mock Moonlitcry for his split heritage, but he knows of it, and is ashamed. That's one of the reasons he acts tough and does his best as his tasks. Feathertouch lost her life in a battle barely a week after Moonlitcry was given his warrior name, and he still quietly mourns this loss, as it was only a short while ago. Though she wasn't the best mentor, he still appreciated her kindness.
  
  
• Any relationships?: None
  
  
• Does your character have a themesong/motto?: Nope
  
  
• What is the codeword from the rules?: Destiny
  
  

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This is a modified bio from a failed site (so I barely got to use him D8) which had recently been started by my friend at the time I made it, that's why the history is like it is. If this is too much like powerplaying, please let me know, I'm willing to change it.

Also, I always have trouble making bios when it comes to the history/relations part, because I never have anyone to be the character's family (who actually exists on the site). Do you have any suggestions about that?

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Nope, I see no powerplaying, and the relationships thing is just there in case you're adopting a kit or making two sibling characters, things like that.
ACCEPTED!

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ah, goodie, thanks ^-^ and my problem was mostly that I always end up killing off all relations like siblings, parents, mentor, as I did here, cause there's no users that actually are those characters. Ah, but maybe I'm just getting annoyed over nothing.