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Post by cheetahclaw on Dec 14, 2010 18:46:12 GMT -5
- Name: Iceheart
- Gender: Male
- Species: Cat
- Age : 2 winters
- Closest breed: Domestic Lynx
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- Physical description (if no picture is available): Black short powerful jaws, slightly high cheekbones. Slightly triangular shaped head, large body slightly arching back. Large legs, hind legs are slightly longer than front legs. Short soft outer coat while the under coat is thick and waterproof. His fur is dark brown with black spots on his legs, back, above his eyes, and tail.
- Status: Pure muscle has hardly any fat on his body
- Rank (if in a colony): Lone Prowler male of the north terratories
- Personality: He is gentle and sociable, can be slightly dominant toward other cats when challenged. He is least likely to back down from a fight he will most likely go in claws first and come out dragging the other cat by his tail. He is friendly toward all cats but loves the thrill of the fight and war. Despite him being so nice he think wildly and loves to go on adventures. He can be childish at times when he has to rest from wounds. He's often found with Soul training or hunting.
- History: Iceheart was born to a lone female who couldn't take care of him. She walked for days trying to find him a home to live in. She had found kittypets her sister and others who would take care of him. But she wanted him to be a prowler of the Twilight colony.
Months had passed since he was born, he and his mother were going through rouge territory. A loud growl could be heard behind them, his mother spun around to face the rouges. Yowling loudly she told him to run, he looked at her for a second than turned and ran. He soon ran into Twilight colony camp, since he was so young they welcomed him and soon found how strong and good he was. At 8 moon old he was driven out of Twilight colony. He traveled for days getting into fights with other cats and other animals. But soon he became the prowler lone male of the North terratories
- Relationships: Mother-deceased
Father-deceased
- Other tidbits: He has a scar going across his muzzle
- Code symbol from the rules: &+
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bambi.
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Post by bambi. on Dec 14, 2010 19:00:44 GMT -5
He sounds like he could be an interesting character, but you should flesh him out more, perhaps add more to his personality and history.
Also, because the colonies are not Clans, and are based on matriarchy, he would have been driven away from the Twilight colony to establish his own territory at about eight months. Either you can de-age him or make him a territory holder, if you want him to remain a prowler. Or if you want to retain his more vital Clannish tidbits, perhaps make him part of the Cult.
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